Practicing the Manga Female Edition

So been watching some tutorials from mikeymegamega, and decided to try and put the lessons to use. I have to say I was pretty surprised how decent the figures turned out. Naturally I can already see things I could change, but I think I've tortured these poor girls long enough

I do have ways to go on my coloring here, sure it'll improve so long as I get off my lazy butt and edit the scans!  

Not sure if people would consider this "mature", but just in case, I'll put on a Moderate filter for now! If someone says otherwise, I can always adjust it later!